New Storyboard

The drawings are not the best quality.

Changes needed to be made to the Magazine and advert

I have been notified that there are a few things that need to be altered on the magazine and advert. I didn't get as high a mark as I hoped I would. Luckily they are only minor changes.
Advert:

CD: 

Video Draft Feedback and song change

Unfortunately due to the disappointing draft attempt, I only achieved a Level 1. I feel that this is an appropriate grade for such a bad video. If i'm completely honest, it doesn't even deserve that. Here is the feedback that I received:
Complete Refilm required. I wanted to do this anyway.
More closeups and mid shots are required in the video to make it more effective.
Get my artist to take it seriously. If she takes it seriously then it will look more effective.
The artist needs to sing the whole song. If she does so then more closeups and mid shots will be achieved. I need to keep it as simple as possible. I need to use bright lighting in this video too to create the best effect possible on my artist. The attention needs to be on her.

On reflection of the draft, and having spoke to my artist, I feel that it is necessary to change the song to Pressure by Paramore. She feels more comfortable doing that song and it is a priority to look comfortable so that the video looks more effective and professional.
storyboard and animatic to come soon.

Final Digipak and Advert

Advert 

Digipak